making love letters

me and my friend Ishu were 'developing' a poem for his love letter. he was in 'love' with my friend Jaya and asked me to write some beautiful originl love lines for him. here are they.
 
  to fall in love,
                         is the greatest achivement.
  to be in love,
                         is the greatest feeling
  to have you to love,
                        is the greatest desire.
  and it just came true.

nice right, according to him it was too cheesy and classic.
so the next one.

  days from now are shrine to you,
   words from your mouth seem poetry afire,
    moves you make are remindr of your affections
     and what my heart says - i love you.

after this, i got a nice scolding about just how much i was stuck in Shakespearean era.
they had been teaching us the seven ages at that time. so i did a bit of naive thinking and here's the next peice.

 you are an angel, the girl of my dreams.
  you are a wonder, just made for me.

and guess what, this hit the jackppot.
Ishu and Jaya got together, for three months.